Shout by Pahiro

Madame Web 2024

30 mins in and the first problem I have is the over-dub of the antagonist. Beyond that the directing isn't great. The story itself isn't too bad right now. We'll see how bad it becomes.

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Okay, well.. dropping 3 teenage girls at your partner's place, no questions asked, seems rather unbelievable.

"Do you trust me?" says the random man in the middle of the forest that I just met??

This is just getting worse. "Great power will come" and now a pregnant woman is in labor? Wtf.

Okay, so the three girls were completely irrelevant to the actual story? I mean, I like the concept of a seer winning against physical power, but it really needs some work. It was enjoyable enough though.

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