I don't like Dylan. He looks like a dangerous man! I feel that he’s going to turn out to be just like Alice's dad and I just know grandma June will use her last breath saving Alice from him.

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Great heart to Hart in this one. Candy's story was clear from the start, but the way it unfolded was well done.

Also, the symbolism of the tree gets me every time. The craftsmanship is beautiful - particularly meaningful with that crack through the heart of it, and in the way it resembles the figureheads on the bows of ships.

7/10 - some minor pacing issues, but solid story development.

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